Date: 2011-09-11 07:46 pm (UTC)
jjhunter: Drawing of human J.J. in red and brown inks with steampunk goggle glasses (red J.J. inked)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
I am breathless--this is incredible. I love your attention to detail (El-mum, ed-techs, coms-comp, Gen-meds, etc.) and how so much is revealed just with word choice alone--within 'ed-tech' is a whole new conception of what it means to educate a child, with the implication of education being a form of programming, a machinery to be fixed and tweaked and run by a technician.

The tension between Raj's needs and those of Ajji-P, the hard choices Ella must make when Kal's away, the 'twins' (and there's a story there, isn't there, about how children seem to come regularly in sets--by design?) being out of synch, all these sharp panes of light intersecting in rainbows of pain and strength and life--did I mention that I think this is a stunning piece? Because it really, really is.

Thank you for writing it and sharing it, and I can't wait to signal-boost it when the index post goes up on October 2nd.

Wow.
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