Phone call - one shot short

again, curl, capture, crow and a cup for my own friday ficlet challenge. This time a one sided dialogue-only piece, as an exercise. FB as to whether it workedwould be much appreciated.

[This got itself auto-saved as 'Jesus fuck Steve' which ammuses me far more than it ought to.]

***** ***** *****

Yeah – yeah I am calling to ask about what the hell was going on last night.

So Si was right?

Jesus fuck Steve! You're crowing about this like you're winning something! – Newsflash. This is not capture the fucking castle – this is your relationship you're gambling with here.

Yeah, and how the hell is Kev going to feel when he gets back and someone mentions that they saw you sucking off some curly haired twink in the back room. What – he'll buy you a pint and drink to your health?

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Phone call - one shot short

again, curl, capture, crow and a cup for my own friday ficlet challenge. This time a one sided dialogue-only piece, as an exercise. FB as to whether it workedwould be much appreciated.

[This got itself auto-saved as 'Jesus fuck Steve' which ammuses me far more than it ought to.]

***** ***** *****

Yeah – yeah I am calling to ask about what the hell was going on last night.

So Si was right?

Jesus fuck Steve! You're crowing about this like you're winning something! – Newsflash. This is not capture the fucking castle – this is your relationship you're gambling with here.

Yeah, and how the hell is Kev going to feel when he gets back and someone mentions that they saw you sucking off some curly haired twink in the back room. What – he'll buy you a pint and drink to your health?

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