I like the invisible bond you've portrayed between Paul and Cameron; you managed to convey so many shifting emotions within that one page of fiction! In that short amount of time, I formed an attachment to Paul; that's how realistic your characterizations are!...Definitely a story that holds much promise if ever fleshed out into a multi-chapter series...*nudge nudge* eh?..eh?!...Very nice! ^-^
Very cool short! ^-^
Date: 2006-04-06 04:30 am (UTC)